XIN Session 18 (Finale) wow
a couple things wrong or kinda cheesey
1. in the fight scene the two are trying to find his weakpoint right in front of him just like he NOT there
2.i think having a huge as support beam would kill someone. and have more things falling
3.they talk way to much while their fighting
4.sitting on a roof in the sunset with a crap load of people around im sure has to be the worst ending.
other than that it was very good your artwork improved greatly over time. very funny stuff in it to kinda random though
the YuYu 